Audience Feedback - Second Draft

From my audience feedback I found that my trailer was coming along well as people told me that they liked it and the scream had the intended reaction of making most people jump. However, my audience told me that improvements need to be made to the effects and more of these need to be added to create the right atmosphere for my trailer. It is also apparent that the newsreader shots need to be filmed again but in a better location and with more preparation to elements such as props and costume.